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"Come with me..." He said.
"I'll follow you anywhere." I said.
He took my hand, took my soul.
I gave my body, gave my heart.

"I'll protect you." he said.
"I trust you." I said.
He hurt me, he did.
I stayed, I did.

"I'm the good guy." He said.
"I'm a good girl." I said.
"He's the devil." They said.
"You're an angel." They said.
"I don't care." I said.
"I love him."

"Don't mind the darkness." he said.
"I'm losing the light." I said.

"We can't lose you." They said.
"This will only sting for a little bit." They said.

"Don't leave me." he said.
"I'm loosing so much blood." I said.

"I won't let you go..." He said.
"I won't go." I said.

"Give me your soul." he said.
"You've always had it." I said.

Black wings surround white .
Death takes life.
Hell beats heaven.
Love beats hate.
This is the "Hell/The Devil" theme for my list.
I'm not quite sure where this came from. Well, ok, Good Omens had something to do with it ;D
And probably how some parents don't allow their child to be with someone if the other person is "not up to par" with their views on the perfect bf/gf.

So anyways, I hope you all like it ^-^
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ForeverMenou Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Writer
So much love!
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SkittlesRus Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you~
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ForeverMenou Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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OMG-its-Kakuzu Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I actually like it. A lot.
Not a poetic form I've seen before.
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SkittlesRus Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
Thankies deary~
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noobyzgir350 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student General Artist
woah true
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SkittlesRus Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Writer
^-^
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MercilessHunter Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Really nice. I also think it wrings true more often than not.
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SkittlesRus Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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LunarGirl909 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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